Hi Riyan, I really liked how you have used a fantastic font to your haiku poem it looks brilliant and you have animated your poem and your title to change into different colours so that it looks eye catching for people to read. I liked the picture of the homeless children but it would look even better if you added more than one picture. What I disliked about it was that you have only highlighted two of you haikus and not the third one as well. With out that your work is amazing and to my opinion it looks fantastic and really eye catching. Well done!!!
Hi Riyan, I really liked how you have used a fantastic font to your haiku poem it looks brilliant and you have animated your poem and your title to change into different colours so that it looks eye catching for people to read. I liked the picture of the homeless children but it would look even better if you added more than one picture. What I disliked about it was that you have only highlighted two of you haikus and not the third one as well. With out that your work is amazing and to my opinion it looks fantastic and really eye catching. Well done!!!
I really love ❤ your writing and pictures